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"Mona's Second Chance" 09/27

9/27/2013

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The moment we've been waiting for! Dun, dun, dun... you only get to see a few lines of this spanking though. ;P
“What--”

He shushed me before the question had left my lips. I obeyed immediately, but my shoulders tensed as I waited to see what he was going to do. I didn’t have to wait long. 

“This is for your attitude on the phone earlier tonight,” he said, and I heard the strike before I felt it: the air swished as he pulled his arm back and then brought it down on my sit spot. Each swat landed there, and I cried out loudly with each one. Before the fifth one landed, my feet were dancing anxiously in anticipation of the next lick. 
 
“Be still,” he commanded in a no-nonsense tone of voice. 
 
“But it hurts!” 

“It is supposed to hurt, honey. Now, be still before I have to start over.”




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They had grown up together. Childhood friends, one-time sweethearts, buddies, then eventually they grew apart. When they met again later, it was love,  followed by marriage... followed by divorce. But somehow, even a year after the divorce, Colby was always the first person she called when she needed help. Colby was her one true love... how was she going to get through life without him?

Then it happens! Colby is willing to give them a second chance... but only if she submits to him as the head of the household. She isn't used to being spanked, and worries that there are some things even a spanking can't fix.  Will they be able to move beyond their past, to build a fresh new future together? Mona loves him so much, and she would do anything for him to save their relationship, but fears that might not be enough. Will she lose him anyway?

21 Comments
Trent Evans
9/27/2013 02:57:15 pm

“It is supposed to hurt, honey. Now, be still before I have to start over.”

Whoa, smokin' :)

Very nice, Dinah!

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Cara Bristol link
9/27/2013 10:39:53 pm

Oh no, we don't want to start over.

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Maren Smith link
9/27/2013 10:50:32 pm

'It's supposed to hurt' Oh wow! Just the words you want to hear when you're in that position and the spanking has only just started.

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Maddie Taylor link
9/27/2013 10:54:06 pm

Love the dancing feet that go with a well spanked bottom. It made me wonder what she had said on the phone to deserve it. Or maybe <gasp> she hung up on him? I can't remember, I'll just have to read it again to find out.

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Katherine Deane link
9/27/2013 10:56:18 pm

Oh No!
not the start over!
Great job, Dinah!
:)

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Tara Finnegan
9/27/2013 11:00:30 pm

Love the way he makes it her fault if he "has" to start over. I'll bet he's begging for her to keep resisting!
Great snip

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LA Cloutier link
9/27/2013 11:25:50 pm

I love the depiction of the scene. The way her feet danced with each lick. And a spanking does hurt. How is she suppose to stay still? ~giggles~
Lovely snippet, Dinah.

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Bella Bryce link
9/27/2013 11:32:35 pm

"Be still." Simple, but nice. Especially in a no-nonsense voice. Sent a wee shiver up my back! Well done :)

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Sue Lyndon link
9/28/2013 12:24:53 am

Bet she'll be nicer to him on the phone from now on. Enjoyed this excerpt:)

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Suzy
9/28/2013 01:00:48 am

Start over (gulp)...better still yourself girl...great job.

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John Satisfy link
9/28/2013 01:33:45 am

What a sexy excerpt. :)

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Thianna D link
9/28/2013 02:05:07 am

Oooh! Love that last line. I bet her eyes widened on that one. LOL Start over?

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Celeste Jones link
9/28/2013 04:19:21 am

What a great scene. Love the juxtaposition of him calling her honey while threatening to start over.

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Natasha Knight link
9/28/2013 04:21:37 am

Funny how we all love that last little bit… :) Nicely done, Dinah.

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Normandie Alleman link
9/28/2013 05:37:37 am

She heard it before she felt it. Awesome. And I love when he tells her it's supposed to hurt. (giggles)

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Mary Wehr link
9/28/2013 09:55:42 am

*ouch* we sure don't want to start over:( Nice!

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Minelle link
9/29/2013 02:00:15 am

Loved this snippet. It captures the tenseness in waiting for that smack to descend...so well.

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Renee Rose link
9/29/2013 02:37:54 am

ooh, he's strict!! Great snippet!

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Joelle Casteel link
9/30/2013 08:17:16 am

hm, still before starting again :D great snippet :)

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Abbie Adams link
9/30/2013 12:29:55 pm

Perfect. I'm there. I loved Colby, Every. Little. thing. About. Him.

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Normandie Alleman link
10/5/2013 08:16:52 am

My "sit spot" - how cute!

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