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Saturday Spankings

7/5/2013

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When we last left our story, Sara was in some major trouble for driving under the influence and running a stop sign. Her husband, Ethan, had to bail her out of jail and he brings her home for a spanking. This excerpt is from his point of view.

With a heavy heart, I directed her to turn around and bend over the bed. Her long honey brown hair hung over her face like a curtain. She turned her head and stared back at me with wide, fearful brown eyes. I knew this was all a surprise to her. She was used to me taking her over my knee, but this spanking was going to be far more serious. I wanted to reach over and comfort her, to reassure her that I loved her more than anything, but I didn’t want to delay it any longer. The time for comforting would come later. 


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11 Comments
Tara Finnegan
7/5/2013 09:51:39 pm

Nice to hear it from his point of view. Great snippet

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Joseph McNamara link
7/5/2013 10:58:07 pm

Love the intensity from them both, her uncertainty and surprise and his desires to console and yet "not right now" approach...

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Daizie link
7/6/2013 12:01:09 am

Wow, I love this setup. Nicely described, and getting it from his POV was a nice touch.

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Adaline link
7/6/2013 12:04:20 am

I like his dominance here with the gentleness of comfort underneath. Oooooooh.

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Susan Arden link
7/6/2013 12:48:48 am

His love is obvious as well as his desire to dominate. Well played.

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Katherine Deane link
7/6/2013 04:28:16 am

Very well done!
I liked reading this from his POV.
Congrats on the new book!
Can't wait to read it!

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Kathryn R. Blake link
7/6/2013 04:51:43 am

Ooh, I love this snippet. His regret, her uncertainty, his desire to offer comfort and reassurance, yet needing to wait until afterwards. Love it. Can't wait to delve into this book. It's begging for me to open up my reader and devour it.

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Renee Rose link
7/6/2013 07:16:00 am

I'm all squirmy in anticipation. Love the empathetic disciplinarian.

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Mary Wehr link
7/6/2013 07:55:23 am

She knew she was in deep do-do because he wasn't granting her his lap to lie upon. Even though she would be spanked, at least she'd be able to feel him, perhaps cling to his leg and gather strength from his body. Not this time. NICE!

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constance masters link
7/6/2013 02:28:57 pm

I loved this Dinah. He’s obvious a kind and caring man, even though he knows he has to set that aside to make his point. :)

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Laila Blake link
7/6/2013 10:37:53 pm

I have to admit, it always makes me uncomfortable when bdsm is mixed with real life consequences... and ipso facto becomes a husband exerting corporal punishment upon his wife but I have to say I liked the snippet and his thought-process.

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