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The Errant Bride Saturday Spanking!

7/11/2013

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TWelcome to another wonderful weekend filled with spanking and erotica! My excerpt this week is from my novel, The Errant Bride. In this scene, Sara has come to Ethan and asked for punishment because she hurt him by bad mouthing him to a friend. While he initially doesn't plan to spank her, this is the first time in their relationship that she has come to him and asked for it, like a good girl. Hope you enjoy! Please feel free to share your thoughts!
This one is a tad bit longer today...hope Mistress Blake doesn't notice! gasp!


“Yes,” she replied quietly. She was smiling at me, and I hoped she could feel the love I held for her. Despite what was about to happen, I had never felt more in-tune or connected with her. I gently took her arm and led her around to the back of the couch. She went willingly without comment or complaint. I guided her over it, and put my hand on the zipper of her dress. 
“I thought this would happen for a different reason,” I whispered in her ear as I pulled it down. It puddled on the floor around her feet. I adjusted her position so that her bottom was sticking out. “We’ll save that for later,” I said huskily, and without another word, I pulled my arm back and let it fly toward her bottom.

That's all for now, Folks! Next week I am debuting a juicy excerpt from my upcoming novel, "Mona's Second Chance". Stay tuned! And don't forget to check out some of the fantastic authors listed below!
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Kathryn R. Blake link
7/12/2013 03:23:45 pm

I don't think I realized Errant bride was told in first person from Ethan's POV. I'm sure he respects Sarah for coming to him, though that won't spare her his discipline. Can't wait to read this book.

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Daizie link
7/12/2013 10:15:38 pm

Very nice. I love that it's from his POV. He can make a necessary punishment feel so intimate and loving.

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Joseph McNamara link
7/13/2013 12:53:27 am

“I thought this would happen for a different reason” -so much to gather from just this line alone... a wonderful taste of this and a welcome addition to my overflowing Kindle too... *smiles*

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Joelle Casteel link
7/13/2013 03:01:46 am

hm, another spanking in the dom's point of view. So lovely :) the dialogue was wonderful

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Natasha Knight link
7/13/2013 06:58:47 am

I'm with the other commenters, didn't realize this was from his POV! Love it.

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constance masters link
7/13/2013 05:15:14 pm

I too enjoyed reading this from his point of view. Great snippet Dinah :)

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Cara Bristol link
7/13/2013 08:17:23 pm

A very tender, loving spanking.

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Patricia Green link
7/14/2013 05:59:52 am

First person and male POV. What a challenge that must have been! More power to you for giving it a try and succeeding. Nicely done.

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renee rose link
7/14/2013 02:52:44 pm

Loved all the details and the loving tone...

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Tara Finnegan
7/19/2013 09:32:03 pm

I love the way you get the sense of disappointment in him. Very empathetic writing, Dinah. Lovely snippet.

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